What is the prompt of the essay?
Essentially a thesis statement should state your opinion/the main idea of your essay. If a thesis is a question, it is no longer a statement.
Depending on what you will be writing about here are some alternatives that are close to your original thesis:
Social media has negative/positive effects on young adults. (discuss positive or negative effects)
Social media can affect young adults in a variety of ways. (discuss both positive and negative effects)
Young adults are affected by social media in many positive/negative ways. (discuss positive or negative effects)
Fitzgerald's message about the American Dream is that it is all disillusionment, meaning fake or not real. In his novel The Great Gatsby, Gatsby throws disillusionment all over the place. He seems like he has friends but when his time comes to have a funeral only one person calls and the person calling just wants his clothing back from Gatsby.
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they might think that you dont care about the conversation, and that something else is more important to them than listening to you
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Answer:
Walter values books because they provide comfort and escape.
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