5 similarities between these pictures:
• There are monstrous snakes or serpentines in both pictures.
• The pictures both include a ship.
• Both pictures have water in them (I'm assuming it's the ocean).
• Both pictures have humans in them.
• The ships look like they are being attacked by the monsters.
^ Also my observations.
I hope this helped you out! c:
A. Helen must clean the floors and the walls.
It was written on the year 2011
Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
It is best when drafting to proofread. I am very bad at this so I need to work on it. It is important because you need to check which sentences don't belong or what words have too many silent e's.
