Answer:
ohm....you got it correct!
Explanation:
the commas are in the right place like it's supposed to be!! ^^
Answer - Low Intelligence
Japanese people attribute frequent smiling to low intelligence. This is evidence of the fact that the acceptable norms of how emotions are expressed greatly differ across cultures. Somewhat similar to the Japanese, <span>German shoppers are typically turned off by friendly greeters and helpful staff.</span>
Start with a claim and reasoning
Answer:
<u>We will be moving into our new headquarters downtown in three months.</u>
Explanation:
The question asks us to improve clarity and precision. According to the example and the instructions, we are allowed to come up with more information. Notice how the example transforms "a long way off" into "not take place for two years". That's is where precision lies. "A long way off" is imprecise because it can mean any period of time, according to the context and situation. To improve it, we need to specify how much time we are talking about. For that reason, in the sentence, "Soon we will be in our new location", I've changed "soon" for "in three months":
We will be moving into our new headquarters downtown in three months.
