For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
The answer is A
Explanation:
I watch Dance Moms and Abby says to all the girls who do lyrical performances they have to show the story of the song with their facial expressions, So the music from the radio the beat is telling the story.
Please mark brainliest
The sentence that relies on emotional language would be : A. you're slowly killing yourself be going to a tanning booth day
The others options seems to be sentences that relies on logical language
hope this helps
Answer:
Personal experience
Explanation:
Personal experience because it can shape someone's vices or thoughts on a specific topic more than anything. Hope this helped
