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slavikrds [6]
3 years ago
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100 Points:Can someone make this paragraph even better. ill mark you as brainliest and also rate you five stars and a thank you.

English
2 answers:
lukranit [14]3 years ago
7 0

Meanwhile, the jellyfish blooms are affecting fisheries, but the problem is also growing throughout the power plants. These plants are in Japan, Israel, and Scotland. Plankton ecologist Steve Hay says, "Science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish.” When the herds clog the power plants, the people have to forfeit their electricity which creates various upset citizens. With so many people affected, there needs to be some clarification.

I hope this is what you wanted :)

prohojiy [21]3 years ago
5 0

While jellyfish swarms are affecting fisheries negatively, they have also spread to power plants, located in many countries such as Japan, Israel, and Scotland. Plankton ecologist Steve Hay says, "Science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish.” This creates problems, especially since power plants supply millions of people's electricity. When the swarms clog up the power plants, citizens lose their electricity and energy, making them unable to go along effectively with their lives. In this case, the swarms of jellyfish are creating large-scale problems that need to be fixed - urgently.

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