Answer:
1. On the third line you wrote enormus, it's meant to be enormous
2. "you would always be put down and act like you were less than a person by white people" - I don't really understand what your trying to imply
3. "While using public transportation you were treated like a " - Use 'Black people' not 'you' since this is the subject.
4. "Colored people were even forced to sit in the back of the bus even if it was empty. " - I thought they were meant to stand?
5. "find a colored bathroom because some" - What colour bathroom?
6. "6 million of them around 1924." - Good use of statistics
7. " the KKK also" - The place where you mention Ku Klux Klan, put in brackets KKK
Overall, this is a strong 500-word essay. This is a good and informative essay as well so you should be proud of yourself.
Explanation:
<span>Patch approaches patients as people first, and their illness is secondary. His sense of humor is the foundation of his healing process while modern technology takes care of the patient's direct needs. As a doctor, opening his clinic is the only way to treat patients rather than their disease holistically.</span>
Answer:
Bruno takes an instant dislike to the young soldier, finding the man too serious. Maria seems awed by his presence, as she stands very straight and holds her hands in front of her without looking into his face and only relaxes when he is gone.
Explanation:
I think the first one is the gods had human characteristics
