Answer: Sometimes you just have to convinse them to believe you and this is your life so your parents don't have to make you do things that they want.
Explanation:
She gives several reasons why people need to make changes to their eating habits and exercise routines
Answer:
When my brother finally got back from serving overseas, my family was happy and proud.
Explanation:
It should be
When my brother finally got back from serving overseas (Pause) my family was happy and proud.
So yes, a comma is needed
Idk if this will work but....
It was a strange night... it was warm but there was a evil feeling in the air it was like a rose I guess because they may be beautiful but the thorns hurt. I was walking through the garden and the farther I walked the darker the sky got and the colder it got. The sky didn’t go Black it went red... I started to run in the other direction but I quickly fell face first but something was pulling me back!! I felt nothing around my ankles I looked back and what I saw horrified me... it was a_____ (leave this blank for a mystery or you can fill it with something!)
