Which sentence uses correct punctuation?

Write a conversation between two people sitting on stairs !

dolphi86 [110]

Answer:

Scene: Two friends meet on the street.

"Hello, John. How are you?"

"I am just fine. And how are you, Martha?"

"Thank you for asking. I am fine. How's your job search coming along."

"My job search is going rather slowly, I'm afraid. Are you still working at Smith and Sons?"

Wasn't that painful to read? The characters are lifeless. You would never speak in that manner in real life, so please don't ever have your characters do it.

Here's a more likely scenario:

"Hey, John, what's up?" Martha asked.

"Not much, you?"

"Same old. You still out job hunting?"

"Yeah, sorry to say. You still at Smith & Sons?"

Now add some filler (deeper POV):

"Hey, John, what's up?" Martha's attempted smile never reached her pretty green eyes. She bit her bottom lip.

John considered his friend for a moment then heaved the heavy backpack off his shoulders. It hit the ground with a thud. "Not much, you?"

"Same old." Martha's voice was so low he had to step closer to hear. "You still out job hunting?" she said as she studied the sidewalk and ran the toe of her shoe along a crack.

"Yeah, sorry to say." He gently lifted her chin to peer into her face. Tears were about to spill there. He felt the pull of her chin as she tried to turn away. "You still at Smith and Sons or did something happen?"

Now we have two living, breathing characters

Explanation:

<h2>PLEASE MARK ME BRAINLIEST AND FOLLOW ME LOTS OF LOVE FROM MY HEART AND SOUL DARLING TEJASWINI SINHA ☺️❤️</h2>

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Read the excerpt from "Why Alligator Hates Dog.”

aleksandr82 [10.1K]

Answer:

The use of the pronouns he and his shows that this passage uses a third-person point of view.

Explanation:

If the view was first person then the crocodile would say "I" instead of "him." On top of that, Crocodrie would say "I" instead of "Crocodrie."

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What is the value of the 6 in 106534?

lozanna [386]

The value in 106534 is 6,000

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A memoir describes past events, but it is not considered a historical document. Why?

Andrei [34K]

A memoir is made to remember the past. Its not made in the past

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This fallacy occurs when an arguer bases a conclusion on too few examples, that are not necessarily typical of the conclusion be

valina [46]

Answer:

Hasty generalization

Explanation:

This describes the fallacy of hasty generalization. This fallacy occurs when a conclusion is reached, despite the fact that the information is insufficient or biased. Therefore, the conclusion is not logically justified. This fallacy proceeds from the particular to the general, as it bases its conclusions on a small sample, and tries to extrapolate this information to the population at large.

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