Answer:
Heres mine, LOL
Explanation:
I was home alone, and I was washing my hair. I used my moms bathtub because her bathtub was more deep and better for me to wash my hair in. My mother has been gone for 3 hours and I didnt expect her and her husband to be home yet. I wrapped myself in a towel, then dried my hair with another towel. Not knowing they got home, the door opened and my whole behind was showing. I had never felt more embarrassed in my life.
What do you need help with?
Answer: Your first paragraph should grab the reader. So they want to draw in and what to learn about whatever you are doing, you want them to dig down deep in there brain and think about that, make it connect personally to someone something or even you.
somehtings you can do in begging is
Try starting with a question.
Begin with a bold statement.
Use an interesting quote.
Put the reader in medias res, that is, in the middle of things. Place the reader in the middle of something happening or in the middle of a conversation.
Challenge the reader by speaking directly to him/her.
Tell the reader what you do NOT want to do in your writing.
Sometimes even a single word that stands as a paragraph can make the reader wonder and read on.
also Don’t be boring, you want to throw in some humor go for it!
but dont be childish be more interesting and funny but not goofy.
Last thing you should worry about is Approach the essay from a different angle
Explanation:
I really hope this help if so can you mark me brainest and tap the heart?
have a good day!
The theme of the poem is about her being young , making life mistakes , and not knowing any better
