If this is how you've presented the question, Its a bit hard to answer it when one hasn't read these books. It'd be best if you'd put both books into a summary for us to go based off of, at most.
I don't want to be rude or anything but this looks like it would be a math question
Depending on what ur topic is,u need a few reasons why u think that is a good claim because that will be evidence that helps support ur claim.
Put it into grammarly, it’ll do a better job than anyone can and it’s faster
Because you are so familiar with your document, other people are better at pointing out it’s flaws.