It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
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5. The carolers' song
6. Rudolph's nose
9. My mom's ornaments
10. The children's toys
11. The store's wrapping paper
The ones that are already filled out need to be changed to look like my response, you are not rewriting the sentence they give you, but making it a short possessive phrase! I hope this helps, let me know if I can help with anything else!
Manner:
Every person should have some <u>manners</u>.
Place:
There is a <u>place</u> called pizzeria around the block.
Time:
Look at the <u>time</u>, well got to get going!
hope this helped!
