VERY good
I like the intro you wrote maybe add another sentence that is stronger for the last sentence
 
        
             
        
        
        
Liturgical ? that sounds right lol good luck :)
        
             
        
        
        
If we stare at a pattern for a sufficient amount of time, our brains will cause the pattern to spontaneously reorganize itself. 
Many psychologists believed that humans' pattern recognition abilities exist to aid us in our survival. This ability make us able to quickly identify possible danger/occurrences from several sign, which will help us to produce faster fight or flight response.
 
        
             
        
        
        
Being normal NOW is liking what everyone else like, (latest fashion trends, current music, etc.) but this my also go against you, and make you be seen as a "follower"