Generally, your parents, siblings, spouses, and children are considered immediate family. Any grandparents/children, cousins, uncles, aunts, or otherwise would be your extended family. You living with your husband is living with immediate family.
✓ The revision that would most likely improve this paragraph is "the elimination of passive language. "
The young contestant would not tire.
Answer:
"but this was all lost upon me. I thought Miss Elizabeth Bennet looked remarkably well when she came into the room this morning. Her dirty petticoat quite escaped my notice."
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