Based on this excerpt the reader can conclude that the two girls are not friends. They seem to be in conflict with each other. Gretchen's body language, "hand on her hips", and her actions, "looking me up and down", show that Gretchen is sizing up her opponent. However, Gretchen also seems a little hesitant to engage the speaker because she does not say anything. The speaker also does not engage with Gretchen, instead letting Gretchen circle around her. There does not seem to be hatred between the girls, but they certainly are not warm and fuzzy.
Brainstorming- collect textual evidence
First draft- expand on and write out ideas in full
Peer review- get suggestions for improvement
Answer:Water
Explanation:
I think the world started because that water somehow came here, then things came to life.
