Answer:
Father of Anne and Margot and head of the group living in his Annex, middle 40s to early 50s, upper
middle class background, a wise man, fair, loyal, attentive, patient, intelligent, soft, level-headed,
optimistic, genuinely liked people, decision-maker, teacher, beloved by his workers who protected him
and his family as well as the other tenants of the Annex throughout the war. He was especially
susceptible to Anne’s charms. He was devoted to his wife, Edith, and comforted her whenever she was
depressed about their living conditions, the attitudes of the van Daans/Dussel, or her relationship with
Anne.
Explanation:
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
In essence, Journey's End depicts how men deal with death, constant fear, sudden shock, attack, and maiming. The play touched audiences' hearts even a decade after the war had ended.
Answer:
a large, airy room inside the main entrance of a wealthy Roman's home
Explanation:
Food that is not organic is treated with pesticides and other chemicals.
