Answer:
In the Long Beach California School District, statistics show that school fights and violence went down by 74 percent after uniforms were introduced.
Explanation:
This sentence has redundancy because it repeats information twice. This is the information that is repeated:
In the Long Beach California School District, statistics show that school fights and violence went down by 74 percent after uniforms were introduced.
Note that<em> statistics </em>and <em>74 percent</em> mean the same thing. In other words, the same information has been expressed twice in the paper.
An alternative will be re-writing the sentence like this:
- In the Long Beach California School District, school fights and violence went down by 74 percent after uniforms were introduced.
In the sentence above, the information is not repeated twice.
