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C. On the 25th March, 18—, a very strange occurrence took place in St. Petersburg.
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Note that the errors cannot be underlined in your picture, but they are identified and listed below.
1) The article is not properly aligned. All the sentences and paragraphs are scattered all over the page.
2) In Paragraph 1, line 1-2, " What do you hope to get across to listeners". This is a question, and a question mark is required.
3) In Paragraph 2, the beginning statement is not a heading and should not be centralised. " About each" should not be at the center since it is a continuation of the previous line.
4) In paragraph 2, line 5, " The most important part of your podcast is what your interviewes have to say". The plural form of 'interviewee' is 'interviewees' and not " interviewes"
5) paragraph 4, line 4. The "um" should be quoted at the beginning and the end. Only the ending part of the quote is included.
Correction: Edit out every time someone says "um"
Rosalind was the second of five children. She was born on July 25, 1920 in London. The Franklin's were an upper-class family who lived a life of luxury. Rosalind never even had to go to school - she would have been provided for from her family's wealth. As a child, she never felt like she was understood. She hated pretend games and did not play with dolls. Rosalind had to find the facts behind everything before she became a believer.
Rosalind attended St. Paul's Girls' School in London. Here she had excellent training in science classes. It was here that she decided her career path. She applied to Cambridge University and passed the entrance exams. However, she almost didn't make it. Rosalind's father did not think that women should attend university and refused to pay for her education. Luckily, Rosalind's mother and an aunt became irate and said they would pay. Of course, Rosalind's father recanted in the effort not to be embarrassed by women paying for the education.
The experience at Cambridge was not the best for Rosalind. There was a stuffy atmosphere for the women studying there. She vowed never to become like the women faculty members there. She graduated in 1941 with a degree in Chemistry (World Book, 2001). She then took a job with Nobel chemist, Ronald Norrish. From here she took a job with the British Coal Utilization Research As...
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...tealing Rosalind's data, but this is close to recognition as she ever comes
