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son4ous [18]
3 years ago
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"I was revising the first draft of my essay and I noticed that one of my paragraphs doesn't support my main point. What should I

do?"
What should you say to help this student?
First, use some prewriting activities to come up with some new supporting ideas, and then try rewriting that paragraph.
It's too late to do anything about it. After you revise, the next step in the writing process is editing.
English
1 answer:
Gnom [1K]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

You can change it in the editing or ask the teacher if the can let you back to revising

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