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dusya [7]
3 years ago
13

Read the paraphrase of the story Henrique wrote.

English
2 answers:
djyliett [7]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive.

Explanation:

As you read, <em>"Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise."</em>

It shows that the text is missing some sensory detail. If Henrique explained more detailed, it would have more action and would hook the readers. For example, where it said, <em>"Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise."</em> It would be more attractive with something like, <em>"Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, </em><u><em>and with a fierce heart, they fought,</em></u><em> despite the noise."</em>

Furthermore, Henrique said <em>"The soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the canyon."</em>, which missed some essential info; <em>"The soldiers walked through the rain </em><u><em>with brave souls</em></u><em> as they approached the canyon." </em>If Henrique added something like that, I would interestingly engage the reader. As I already said, the lack of sensory detail makes a story bland, not worth the time. Like when Henrique said, <em>"Then the dragon approached, and it roared."</em> It lacks descriptive information to make the story seem real. If Henrique included phrases like, "with a breath of flames" or "fire filled the dragon's eyes, therefore, making it roar."

slavikrds [6]3 years ago
4 0
Second option. “Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive”
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