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Add clear and logical transitions between ideas and replace words and phrases with other that are more concrete
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Yes, I have, It was Mabel from "Gravity Falls." She wanted to make summer last longer/Forever for all of her adventures to continue and never end, and to have fun with her brother and grandpa/uncle stan. The bad severely outweighed the good. People died, were turned into stone, hade their facial features moved around and had to live in fear for a while before things were cleaned up. All of this caused people to be scarred for life, never able to forget such an event. But when things return to normal, she learned a lesson and was fine with going home and summer ending.
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my brother and sister are all teenagers. i have learned from them that teenagers are weird.for..... do strange things to their hair.you......next.first...shaves his head. when
... he looks scary.meanwhile....they look fine. then one day kelly will have blonde ..
This is D, 'direct object'. Because you can ask the question used for direct objects - what- (I don't know - what? - why I said that).