Find his love, Nimmie Amee, since his tin body had no heart, so naturally he thought he could no longer love, and ultimately lost interest of pursuing a future with Nimmie Amee.
Answer:needs to be short and energetic, and reveal your character.
Explanation:
DON’T: Summarize.=“that’s when I realized” and “I learned” and “the most important thing was…
DO: End in the action.=Don’t ruin the moment. End earlier. say more to keep it interesting.
Explanation:
Peter was tired when he arrived home because he caught up at dawn and he was driving for 10 hours
I want to get my car but it wasn't there when I park my car on a Yellow line it was towed away
Mick was a homeless beggar because he wasn't all this work he had a successful business but it went bust
last week John move to the house which he first soft while he was driving on holiday in Scotland jean and Peter arrived home when when they have hawked all the day and
Answer:
finally
Explanation:
finally means last/ending
She doesn't want him to know
