Describe a time when you felt disrespected. Present the experience as if it is a scene from a novel. Describe the setting where
the event took place. Explain who was there. Show what they did and said. Explain how you felt. Step 2: Describe the same experience a second time, but this time revise what people said and did in a way that would have left you feeling fully respected. In this revision of history, have everyone speak and behave in ways that would have changed the outcomes and experience for the better, leaving you feeling fully respected.
as i was sitting alone with my face flushed relising how i messed up.
i looked at the girls who asked me such an evil question "are you a lesbian" they said "yes why wouldnt i be" my little wholsome mind didnt know. now i became a joke to my class a new school and every one looked at me like i had a problem
2: i sat filled with pride my face flushed from all the attantion i got i looked at the girls that asked me a question that made me popular "are you a lesbian" they said "yes why wouldnt i be" my little mind said in sheer confidence every one looked at me and i felt brave and respected
