<u>Original sentences:</u> José received a college scholarship for baseball from Vanderbilt University. He has been playing for years. He will attend this fall.
<u>Correct</u><u> </u><u>combination</u><u>:</u> Playing for years, Jose who will be attending this fall, received a college scholarship from Vanderbilt University.
<u>Reasoning</u>
1. <em>since</em><em> </em>and <em>for</em><em> </em>cannot be used together for time depiction.
2. "..and attending this fall" seems incomplete due to incorrect use of tense.
<em>Hope</em><em> </em><em>this</em><em> </em><em>helps</em><em> </em><em>:</em><em>)</em>
GPS aren’t all that good, in fact GPS can still get hacked since you need a 4 satellite range in order to receive signal. GPS trackers could infringe on your privacy. They can reveal private information about your whereabouts. Sometimes, this information could be used against you in court if you were up to no good. This is a small price to pay for all the above benefits and nothing to worry about if you are a law abiding citizen
GPS can actually get a person lost, so they don’t always work. Having a smartphone or an actual GPS only gives a person an illusion of control. It is still a map, and if you can’t read a map, you cant read a map. The little blue dot may show you where your going but getting lost, taking the wrong turn, or going into the wrong street can still be a major setback.
However, GPS trackers are a perfect navigation tool. GPS trackers have proved themselves quite useful in the cargo delivery and public service vehicle industry. Investors and cargo owners can always tell their valuable’s location, status and the exact arrival time. Including one of the most useful sources, most useful advantage of having a GPS tracker lies in the fact that the authorities can always pinpoint the tracker’s location. This will come in handy when you are trying to track your stolen car, lost cargo or loved one through their mobile device.
(Just change a few words or phrases so you won’t be accused of plagiarism)
Not sure how to answer this lol
“O LOVE my queen and goddess” is an example of INVOCATION. It is used to address a deity or muse in order to ask for help, inspiration or to make a special request. It is usually place at the beginning of a piece of work.
