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In the first part
"Dear future me,
This is what I want you to know
You used to always cover things up
But now the world's gonna know"
Maybe change the last know (bolded) to "be aware", "realize", or "see"
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It sounds repetative. Despite that, very good poem! :)
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I did not understand the question
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Im not sure if this is right but this is just wut i think
The answer is:
We passed the School, where Children strove At Recess—in the Ring— We passed the Fields of Gazing Grain— We passed the Setting Sun— Or rather
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