the tone of this passage is like she is straight foward and boring uknow how i know it says yes she burned her jacket it contributes to the meaning because its sio boring lots of people do not want to read it but if it had more figurative language it would make readers actually want to read it.
Analyze different parts of the creed and write why & how these could effect you in your daily life/ as a cadet. This would probably be the easiest way to write this.
