I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. because (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary) in real life but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. but I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. so (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.

Explanation:

I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.

Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.

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2 years ago

The pony the light horse and the draft horses are three types of domestic horses identify the correct parts of speech only the s

Luda [366]

Pony or horses are the subject

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3 years ago

. When the speaker of "War Is Kind" says, "Do not weep, maiden, for war is kind," what technique is he using to make his point?

bonufazy [111]

Answer:

J. Verbal Irony

Explanation:

War is Kind is a poem by Steven Crane.

The poem begins with the speaker telling a maiden not to weep -

Do not weep, maiden, for war is kind

The technique used here is verbal irony.

Verbal Irony: This is a literary technique that occurs when a speaker says something that contrasts with what he means; his actions and emotions.

Verbal irony was used on the line above.

The speaker is very much aware of the brutality and unkind nature of war but still describes war as a kind phenomenon and tells the maiden not to weep.

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3 years ago