1) As I sat on what I thought was my deathbed, I believed that leaf was connected to my life force. That once it became dry and fell, I would die along with it.
2) The leaf was special to me because I believed that we were the same. Just waiting for the day we were blown away in an angry storm. We both were just barely hanging on until we died.
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B. During the visit to the zoo, i noticed fewer animals sleeping
Answer:
Two of the sentences use incorrect pronouns, actually. You are using the wrong ones, they should instead be as follows.
The spelling bee winner was her.
<em>He </em>and I found the buried chest in the backyard.
