Answer:
After changing the pronoun focus, the sentences can be:
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps one lose weight and improve one's cardiovascular systems while one enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
(Alternative answer - see the explanation below)
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps people lose weight and improve their cardiovascular systems while they enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
Explanation:
When writing formally, we must avoid permeating our texts with sentences that are too personal. Formal writing demands impersonality, which makes it sound more trustworthy and unbiased. Therefore, using the first person "I" should be avoided. One way to substitute it is by using the pronoun "one", as we did in the first answer above. Some people find it difficult to use "one". If that is the case, we can always use "you" or "people". These do not sound as formal as "you", but are still less personal and informal than "I".
Bessie Coleman was a black aviator, when being black was seen as different and wrong. She encouraged young african americans to take risk and do what they want to do. She encouraged them to reach their dreams and not let their color interfere with that.
The national junior honor society induction ceremony is a formal event where students who have met the criteria of the honor society are sworn in as official members of the society. students must meet academic standards and complete service work to be eligible for induction at the ceremony
In "A Worn Path", Old Phoenix Jackson was able to hit the dog her cane before falling into a ditch. She waits until a young white hunter shows up and helps her out of the ditch. He is demeaning at first about her age, then shows prejudice because he says “I know you old colored people…wouldn’t miss going to town to see Santa Claus!”
She sees a nickel has fallen out of the hunter's pocket, and before taking it, she distracts him by saying that his big black dog isn't afraid of anything. Not only does he chase it off to prove her wrong, but also points a gun at her at an attempt to assert power.
Answer: c. pretended not to hear
