One element of contemporary literature is the use of historical events. Which sentence in this excerpt from Jhumpa Lahiri’s nove
l The Lowland contains a reference to a notable historical event? Until the mid-forties, from behind the wall, their father used to watch horses racing around the track. He’d watched from the street, standing among the bettors and other spectators unable to afford a ticket, or to enter the club’s grounds. But after the Second World War, around the time Subhash and Udayan were born, the height of the wall was raised, so that the public could no longer see in. Bismillah, a neighbor, worked as a caddy at the club. He was a Muslim who had stayed on in Tollygunge after Partition. For a few paise he sold them golf balls that had been lost or abandoned on the course. Some were sliced like a gash in one’s skin, revealing a pink rubbery interior. NextReset
Benny is not pacing his story so it does not flow and is hard to understand. Pacing is especially important when telling a story or giving a presentation.
The sentence is incorrect because there isn't supposed to be a comma after "loves". Also, there is no form of punctuation after the last word of your sentence.
