The author most likely chose to call this story “The Cold Equations” because he believes that space is a freezing wasteland wants to indicate that the EDS is cold needs to communicate that math is boring tries to foreshadow that numbers are heartless
Answer:
Get rid of “ing” If you look through your passive sentences, chances are you'll see quite a few “was”s and “were”s followed by an “ing” verb.
Move your adjective (describing word) before your noun. ...
Change the order of your sentence...
Answer: You don’t have anything man. Include a pic or something so we can tell what you mean
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8 May 1950
It was a crazy time being on the island with just schoolboys. We were on the plane to escape the war, but we had our own war. Many people think that children are innocent, that we are not capable of murder and brutal violence. But we are capable of such things. We can be savage. I desperately wanted to be civilised, building huts and trying to get rescued from the island. But in the end, I was one of them. I killed a boar yet I felt thrilled and was partly responsible for Simon’s death. I am ashamed of how evil I have become and can be.
I miss the civilised and responsible child I once was. But even though I have lost my childhood innocence and have seen more brutality than I could have ever imagined, I have never really lost who I am. I am still the Ralph that holds onto civilisation, and in some ways, I am still a chief. Leadership post-island life will be different as this time, I have a keen understanding of our human nature. And I want to be a better person to honour the death of my dear friends.
