Answer:
one of them is a fragment, it's the latter sentence.
Explanation:
it seems that the second sentence has gotten it backwards.
the beginning part "especially when the wind picked up" is what makes it a fragment.
doesn't it make better sense if it were written in this way instead?
"the conditions were perfect for flying our kite, especially when the wind picked up."
The horse is the direct object
A picture of her wearing the first dress she designed.