Question

Can someone edit my host family introduction letter.

Answer 1

Answer:

I edited some of your letter!

Tell me if you find any mistakes. I will surely fix em.

Explanation:

Dear host family and instructors,

My name is "blank," and I am so touched to apply for this program. I'm from a suburban city in the United States, located in the state of 'Blank". I live with my family. I'm constantly working at home, at the library, or at one of my favorite cafes. My family sees me as a responsible, determined, and dynamic person who works non-stop. My friends see me as someone stubborn, honest, and who loves to joke around. I have a more serious relationship with my family and a more pleasant one with my friends, although I can be very private. My relationship with my family is complex, but whose isn't? I like taking a leadership role in my family, helping my siblings or parents, and guiding them. I seek advice only when I can't find a solution. It's more of a last resort to me, but I always cherish any help I get. My friends come and go. I have various friends, all of whom I appreciate. I concentrate as much as I can on my schoolwork; it's my number one priority.

I enjoy being a part of the community. I'm a reserved person, but I still see contributing to your community as necessary; it can help you become comfortable with others. I like working individually, but when there are group projects, I make sure everyone works equally. I am also a manager of our school's tennis team, responsible for sending out emails, setting up meetings, making schedules, etc.

I have made sure to acknowledge the challenges I have to overcome. I'm starting to practice my Korean skills. I know it is not confirmed that I will get in, but it will benefit me in the long run if I prepare well. I have made sure my parents are comfortable with this; we've talked and ensured that we're all on the same page. When I was choosing the country I was interested in, I made sure to pick a place that I knew would challenge me, give me a good experience, and explore new cultures.

I hope to become an aerospace engineer; my passion for building stuff started with legos then expanded to rockets and planes. I want to do the best I possibly can as a student, a sister, and a daughter. I want to be in a comfortable place where I can be qualified to apply for good colleges. I want a solid future for my family and me. My mother went to law school but could never work after getting married, and my dad didn't even go to college. I want to be the first person in the family to graduate college and get a job with my degree. I want to buy a house, and each of my siblings would have their room, and my mom would have her dream kitchen.