You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
Johan August Strindberg, was a Swedish novelist, playwright, essayist and painter. Since childhood, Strindberg had a massive interest in religion, natural science, and photography. As a child, he always longed for a maternal figure due to her mother's bitterness and resentment of his intelligence. Later, after the death of her mother, his father married again with Emilia Charlotta Pettersson. This grew anger in Strindberg.
Therefore, circumstance what caused Strindberg to cut off from his family was due to his father's remarriage after his mother's death.
Since misery and depression are both sad/bad kinds of feelings, then we have to find a pair of words that have the same kind of feeling in order to complete this analogy. The correct answer should be melancholy and boredom.
Jin Wang would be the best example.....
