Okay let's begin , " Sometimes , not one single fish would make an appearance " Appearance was spelled incorrectly . Then , "As an adolescent, I met a new group of friends." Adolescent was spelled incorrectly . Those were the only two I caught that was misspelled
He has children in three grades: second, fourth, and sixth.
The passive voice comes from the directions. You are receiving actions.
This is a really good poem! (I could never come up with this kind of poem lol!)
