Add phrases to make the story flow smoothly (cohesian markers, pronouns , conjuctions) eliminate unnecesary details. and proofread
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The Prince was so angry because the families keep on fighting and distributing the peace of the city. He threatens to kill any one of the Capulets or Montagues that fight again and disturbs the city's peace.
Being loyal in life opens a doorway to many opportunities. Showing an individual that you’re loyal makes the person respect you one hundred percent more. Being loyal can also land you to get a job, socializing with new people, and be known as a good person.
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Answer: No, it is not a run-on sentence</h3>
This is one full thought that doesn't run on for too long. The "overcome with joy" portion is the dependent clause that needs the other part "Mrs. Monroe told her husband the exciting news about her promotion" which is the independent clause. The independent clause could be its own sentence without the dependent clause, but not the other way around.
