how can i change this into a better paragraph ? please help! if you can rewrite it with better words/ adjectives id appreciate i

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Nookie1986 [14]

2 years ago

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how can i change this into a better paragraph ? please help! if you can rewrite it with better words/ adjectives id appreciate i

t. 20 points.

English

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TiliK225 [7] · Answer 1 · 2022-06-14T05:35:13+03:00

TiliK225 [7]2 years ago

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This is a decent paragraph!
Maybe, remove the “Last but not least example of how technology impacted social change in an effective way” and put “Finally,” or “Last but not least,” and simply explain your final reason.