Feedback:
I think your descriptions are great! I like the way you describe the setting and how it makes the observer feel with extreme detail. I was able to picture everything really well in my head. Moving forwards, I think what you should do is reassess what you're writing about. Maybe I misunderstood what you meant by <em>"describing a moutain," </em>but I feel that you spent too much time talking about the overall setting and how it made the observer feel instead of the actual mountain. I liked your description of the mountain being "a beast arisen from nowhere; its tip to be unseen" and I think you should continue this as you'll prevent yourself from drifting too far from the object of interest.
The Answer is D. resolution is when the conflict is solved.
Answer:
Heres mine, LOL
Explanation:
I was home alone, and I was washing my hair. I used my moms bathtub because her bathtub was more deep and better for me to wash my hair in. My mother has been gone for 3 hours and I didnt expect her and her husband to be home yet. I wrapped myself in a towel, then dried my hair with another towel. Not knowing they got home, the door opened and my whole behind was showing. I had never felt more embarrassed in my life.
What is this for and if you would like to email me the picture of the column I can attempt to help you solve the problem.
