A critique is honestly just your opinion on the work, also you didn’t put any pictures of the pieces of art so no one can actually answer this for you :/
Answer: check out this link
http://animationandperspective.weebly.com/the-corpse-bride.html
Explanation: (for victor) he is described as a shy, timid character whose body language suggests that he is easily startled. When he met Victoria he had stuttered, we can infer that his nerves got the best of him and is nervous in nature. He had stumbled when trying to recite his vows which re-enforces that he is an anxious individual.
I think it helped. It gave a better picture. It helped showing the doc examine the girls because in the<span>story it gets somewhat confusing. It was a more natural tone</span>
