Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
Answer:
B) She should state the main idea of the article.
Explanation:
The highest point of action in a story is: A.The Climax. Hope that answers your question.
The answer is A. There is a metaphor and a simile. I hope that this helps. =)