Think of it as a less formal essay, in narratives, there are no boundaries in what you are writing because it's more personal to you. It's sort of like a free-write.
Capricious (adj.)
1590s, "humorous;" c. 1600, "apt to change the mind suddenly, fickle," from French capricieux "whimsical" (16c.), from Italian capriccioso, from capriccio (see caprice).
The first sentence has the pronoun reference error. it sounds like AL is scratching not the dog. the error is using "he" just eliminate the word.
Mother was sitting near the window that was shattered by the heavy winds.
Kim and Jane were discussing the play that they both had seen.
The poem that Peg wrote for me was good enough to print.
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