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Dmitrij [34]
3 years ago
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Which words should be removed from this sentence to make it clearer and more concise?

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1 answer:
Komok [63]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

I believe the sentence is fine the way it is, the only problem is it is not concise at all. I would say take away the adjectives, because even if it makes this scene for picture-able, it turns it into a run-on sentence.

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