Can you at least put a picture or write some of the paragraphs that showed a bit of the grandmothers opinion about there vacation that would help me and answer that question that your stuck on.
Answer:
North Carolina residents want the government to fix existing roads first, before building new ones. They also favor improving rail services and buses to increase the number of public transportation users. But some citizens complain that governments are robbing Peter to pay Paul, shortchanging one area that needs transportation funds in order to contribute to another area.
Explanation:
Only use the important part
We as Americans have the right to freedom, and liberty!
I would say the two women, sitting next to me, got up and left.
Answer:
I changed around some syntax in your reasons to make them stronger.
Intro:
Hook [eSports is becoming increasingly prominent in pop culture]. Thesis [therefore, eSports should be considered a school sport]. Reasons [cognitive: Problem solving & strategy skill development. Social Development. Entertainment and art.]
BP1: reason 1 [Cognitive: Problem solving & strategy skill development]. explain [it is important to develop these skills because...]
BP2: reason 2 [Social Development]. explain [it helps students develop socially by..... and it is important to develop socially because....]
BP3: reason 3 [entertainment and art]. explain [these are important because....]
BP4: counterargument [some people think eSports should not be a school sport because ______. But their reasoning is weak because _____]
Conclusion: restate reasons, then thesis, but phrase things differently than you already did to keep things interesting.
