Question

Good authors choose their words very carefully. Take a few minutes to write a short paragraph describing an experience you have recently had. Pick a location you went to or an event you attended. Once you have finished, read over what you have written. Now, write a second paragraph. In it, you will repeat the information from the first paragraph, but you will choose your words more carefully. Ask yourself questions like What words capture this image exactly? What is the best word to convey how something looked, or how I felt? Take more time with the second paragraph.
Your response should be at least 150 words in total.

Answer 1

I was very bored I decided that I would play with the fire

Answer 2

Answer: Recently, I was very bored. I decided that fire was good to play with. I had been eating Cheetos and decided to light one of them. The flaming Cheeto fell on the carpet. The rest is history.

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