Answer:
A wonderful holiday I have had
(A brief description of the holiday )
Last month, we went to Erbil to spend our holiday. I went with my parents, my sister and my two brothers. We stayed at a nice hotel in the city centre. The place was very nice. I like it so much. During the day we used to visit the nice places there. There are a lot of parks and malls to go shopping. We visited Erbil Citadel and the high mountains which are covered with snow. So, I took a lot of photos. In the evening we used to stay in the hotel because the weather was cold. We had dinner and watch TV. I used to play video games till late hour. The best thing about the holiday was the hospitality and the nice treatment of the people. But the worst thing about the holiday was the very cold weather.
Answer:
C. Anna tried to hold back the dog, but she just was not strong enough for the bulk, power, and movement of the dog.
Explanation:
A revision is when a given sentence or any given passage is rewritten in a better form. This can involve changes in the words, or voice or tense, or even the structure of the whole sentence.
In the given sentence, the proper noun is used after the pronoun. Instead of using the pronoun to start the sentence, if we use the proper noun "Anna" to start the sentence, then the sentence is made easier to understand and also who is being talked about. Also, changing the structure of the sentence by rearranging certain words will make the sentence better in form and construction.
Thus, the revised sentence will be option C.
First, Montresor must hide his feelings of hatred for Fortunato. He does this so successfully that throughout the entire plan, and even at the end, Fortunato has no clue that Montresor wants to kill him.
Second, Montresor chooses Carnival time to enact his plan; this guarantees that Fortunato will not be immediately missed, buying Montresor some time if he needs it. Brilliant.
Third, Montresor must be able to bring Fortunato to his empty house. To do that, he does the simplest and most clever thing he can think of to do during Carnival time
The overall moos is Gloomy