Answer:
Order of ideas, tone, and punctuation and phrasing could be revised.
Explanation:
It is known that when giving a presentation or writing an essay, the speaker should convince the public little by little, providing evidence that will support the final hypothesis, in this case, how great Roosevelt was. Due to this, the beginning would be: "Theodore Roosevelt was a great president because..."
Punctuation and phrasing are other issues in the paragraph. Some sentences are too long and carry a lot of information that could be overwhelming for the reader (specially for such a short paragraph.) In example, the phrase "he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reform" could be written again: "his impact could be seen in almost every aspect of the country, such as in politics, economics, and in society in general."
The first statement could be at the end, like "an equal share of opportunities. Due to this, Roosevelt is the greatest president."
Tone is also important because it seems to be part of an essay or a presentation, so words like "broke up" could be changed for more proper ones.
Answer:
Its either A or B but i'm pretty sure its A
Hope this helped! :)
I believe it's B. It seems to be the only one that is very blunt and uses a different tone from the other sentences.
To be honest, I googled this, so reword your answer, but hopefully this helps.
Family
In the book, Bud's mother passed away when he was just six years old. Since then, he has been living in foster homes and orphanages. He only as a couple of items that were his mother's to remember her by. One of the items is a flyer for a musician, Herman E. Calloway. Bud is convinced that this is his father and sets out to find him. Throughout the book, Bud is determined to find the man who he thinks is his father. This illustrates the theme of the importance of family.
Bud finds out the Herman E. Calloway is not his father, but his grandfather. Bud then is left to wonder why his mother ran away from her family, and if she was unhappy enough to run away, why did she keep flyers of her father and his band? These questions once again center around the theme of family importance.
The answer is C :
He shows an intrestrest in her Chrysanthemums
