Question

I am writing an opening statement for an assignment and Grammarly is telling me there is passive voice misuse in this statement: "He should be prevented from disrespecting the gods and believing in his false ones." I am stuck on this could someone help?
(PS: I do not have Grammarly Premium so it just tells me I have the mistake not how to fix it).

Answer 1

Don’t use words like he me you I or we or anything like that when writing formal essay. It causes grammarly to say passive voice. I would personally ignore it though.

Answer 2

Answer:

I think you should put, " He should have been prevented from disrespecting the gods and believing in false ones."

Explanation:

I think you should try this sentence and see if it will work better than your old one. If it still doesn't work, it is ok and you can put back your own sentence.

I am sorry if this didn't help