I am not quit sure what your question is but I think it is great! :-) Only thing I would change is your hook. With the hook you want something strong to grab the readers attention. Example: Would you stay out late just to suffer many consequences? (Sometjing like that) Try to use something to really make the reader think about your topic!
Do you know how to reopen your asked questions
Answer: women should be provided with suitable resources to fulfill their duties
Explanation:
Ayo, hello my name is so and so
