Question

Read the following e-mail, which needs revising, editing, and proofreading:

Answer 1

The revision that would be the most effective would be the last one.

“Ms. Johnson,

Thank you so very much for the kind opportunity to meet with you and thoroughly discuss the fantastic astronaut program at NASA. I am deeply grateful to be considered for this amazing job. I sincerely believe that I’d be a definite asset to all the fine people there with my extensive experience. I genuinely anticipate hearing good news at your earliest convenience.”

Answer 2

Answer:

I think the answer would be the last one: Ms. Johnson,

Thank you so very much for the kind opportunity to meet with you and thoroughly discuss the fantastic astronaut program at NASA. I am deeply grateful to be considered for this amazing job. I sincerely believe that I’d be a definite asset to all the fine people there with my extensive experience. I genuinely anticipate hearing good news at your earliest convenience.

Explanation:

I think that is the answer because this seems very formal, and my dad writes lots of these types of emails to his bosses...

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