Question

How can i improve my sentence??

Answer 1

Answer:

State the "real life problems" on discrimination and injustice. Another thing is  logical facts isn't really "FACTS" if its logical then its ethos , meaning its not professionally cited its personal bias so erase that from your sentence if this is for a report or article. Not only do you need to include a fact , but make it make sense as to why you chose the surrounding fact. down below is an example.

Explanation:

Use this for reference-

It's stating well known issues around the world surrounding prejudice and injustice for example its more likely that a person of color is 1.2-2.0 times more likely to get pulled over then a person of american decent as stated by the NYU Civil Department in a study done in 2020 surrounding racial injustice .