A rough draft is the preparation for a final essay and as I see it a rough draft may contain all of the elements mentioned in the given options. For example, prepositions, nouns and adverbs are also sure to be included, since it is a written piece and these are central components of any language. Transitions will probably be utilized, as you will probably build up a few points in your exposition and should change from thought to thought.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
